Suggestions for your paper

Yui,

Very good. I’d like you to go thru and expand any paragraph that is too short. Also, please look at the related posts for things to add to your paper.

Also, you need to think about the order of your sections. I think that you want to start with the origin of Christmas, then Christmas and the Church, they the social aspects of Christmas and then Christmas in Japan. Then your conclusion, which should explain the relationship of Christmas in the West to Christmas in Japan.

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